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kyle
05-03-2005, 02:35 PM
This took me a few days to accomplish, with this one song on repeat everytime I sat down to write this. Haha. Hopefully you all enjoy?


I've finally come to terms with this.
This blank piece of paper is my dry canvas
calling out my name, screaming at the top
of its lungs for me to tickle the tops of these
blue lines with something that comes from the
heart, and mind, and the soul, down my arm,
into my hand, through my finger tips, and finally
out the sharpest point of my pen filled up with
black ink.
Think hard about the littlest things we do and take
for granted and try and make it vivid as hell.
They couldn't do it, could they?
I guess this would be their cue to say I
am demented.
Question my santity.
Be my guest.
In retrospect you were always the one with your chest
hanging out but quik to deny that you're a whore.
Theses words...I stole them from some brilliant writer
with an artistic mind, heart and soul.
I came up from behind and thrusted my knife
into his neck.
He lost his footing, fell down, and died with these words
in his book.
I just changed the name and took credit for something
I couldn't accomplish even if I tried.
Their...Now I am just like you. (A liar)
When the pretty music starts to play I'll go
into the open and waiting arms of my wife and
you'll have to settle for the shitty streets of 25th and Valley.
Your bestfriend is a rat named Fernando and your
neighbor in the box next door to yours doesn't even
trust you. (Burn bridges sweetheart)
Learn a lesson?
I doubt it pal.
Abuse every power you had then and end up here
now.
The streets are not a friendly place for a greedy
bastard like yourself.
Just remember to think of my wife and I when
you're eating out of trashcans and stealing from the
store.
Look hard, inbetween the almost invisible lines
and you'll learn it wasn't a fashion show.
Looks don't determine success.
How dare you!
How dare you!
(Pretend, pretend! Quik! Before they realize your failures.)

PEACE FROG
05-04-2005, 10:39 AM
Sorry to hear of your situation. Not to minimize your pain, but hey my brother, consider it fertilizer for the soul. It is all part of growing up and out. I appreciate the way that you are able to express yourself, in good times as well as bad. I had seen your photo posts, you are a very handsome young man. You my friend are truely an artist who is both caring and sensitive. Dude, chicks dig that shit!!! Peace little Brother. ED

kyle
05-04-2005, 08:29 PM
Sorry to hear of your situation. Not to minimize your pain, but hey my brother, consider it fertilizer for the soul. It is all part of growing up and out. I appreciate the way that you are able to express yourself, in good times as well as bad. I had seen your photo posts, you are a very handsome young man. You my friend are truely an artist who is both caring and sensitive. Dude, chicks dig that shit!!! Peace little Brother. ED

Thank you very, very, much! :)

First off, I just want to say their is nothing to be sorry about. Haha. Everything for me is going better than perfect actually. I am still with my lover, (which I highly doubt that will ever change) and my work with photography is actually starting to get noticed and I recently won an award for my work, and I have some work on display at our schools District Office.

This was just something I wrote because I was in one of those "artistic" moods, you could say? I wanted to write something really different from what I normally write, yet keep it close to my heart and know that it actually has alot of meaning to me and I think I accomplished that mission. I just wrote about people that I know, not friends just people I know because of classes we share together, and the things they do and how they are, and how ignorant they can be. I must admit that I have learned quite alot in the past four years of my high school career about people/friends and how they work. It's very interesting if you ask me. Haha. I am glad that I only have 27 more days left until I graduate high school for good. It was definatley a huge learning experience for me and really made me realize who I am and want to be...I just wish I could find the proper words to explain what this is about but I can't. It's so hard to explain because it has alot of meaning to it for me and I wish I could share that, but I can't figure out the words too. Hopefully what I have said made some sort of sense? Haha.

Kyle.