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PEACE FROG
05-13-2005, 08:49 PM
Annie was a sweet little girl
She loved to color and draw
In the minds eye of a seven year old
Twas beautiful what she saw
And everything she saw she drew
She used all sixty four
Everyone who knew the girl
Displayed them
On their refer door
One night at a party
A special guest did see
Her picture of kids playing
A tire swing and a tree
Who is this amazing little artist
This angel sent from heaven
I'll have to get her number
You say she's only seven
My client will just love this
On this I have a hunch
I'll have my people get ahold of her people
We'll meet
We'll talk
Do lunch
Now she draws for a company
Ad campaigns and such
You'd think that she'd be happy
But she does'nt like it much
Her colors number twenty two
The ones that they've approved
She draws whats on the memo
It tells her what to do
Now her colors all run dry
All she does is pout
They've tied her hands
Put blinders on
They poked her minds eye out
A successful campain later
A new one in their sights
A twelve year old pop singer
We'll get the copyrights
This campaign will be the best
We'll make her a pop hero
Oh so sad for Annie
Her colors number Zero
She's no longer allowed to draw
Though her talent is the same
She cannot draw the things she saw
IT SEEMS THEY OWN HER NAME

PEACE FROG
05-13-2005, 09:06 PM
The above poem is dedicated to a friend, "the one called Bandaid"

BandAide
05-14-2005, 06:09 AM
Oh Dear! I'd better post some now poems I've written!!!!! It DOES make me sad not to. I generally just avoid this board all together in order to restrain myself. Will power. Self control. Are you in there?

feral
05-14-2005, 03:10 PM
I like it man. It just seems too true.

LIBRA
05-17-2005, 10:19 AM
Wow, you seem to know her some how, I thought it was a poem of someone close to you, I like it though. Reminds me of a child star not aloud to shine.

PEACE FROG
05-18-2005, 11:18 AM
Naw... just made it up. It is pretty though, if I might say so myself. When I wrote it I had like twenty minutes to get out the door for work, went to post it and my computer glitched. I lost it. I wrote down fragments that I could remember (it is long for me, and I don't always rhyme) and then reassembled it when I got home! Anyways...... I was trying to get a response that I did get, now we'll see if it works!?!? There are certain people on this board that not only inspire me but also encourage me. I don't post anywhere else, so this place has a special groove for me. :)

LIBRA
05-18-2005, 11:26 AM
Thats awesome!! I dont post anywhere else either, dont want to I like it here.

I hope your little plan works too, I'll keep my fingers crossed!! ;)

Good work for a quickie!!

PEACE FROG
03-12-2008, 12:58 PM
Bump** Graehstone, you might like this.

LIBRA
03-12-2008, 01:05 PM
I read it was like wow this is great, then scrolled down to see that it was from 05, lol Ive already read it, silly silly girl :D

This is great though. And I miss Bandaide :(

Graehstone
03-12-2008, 01:05 PM
Bump** Graehstone, you might like this.I do, I do! Loved the flow, saddened by the message as it's too close to the truth of everyday happenings in those circles, but this is just the kind of thing I like, thanks for sharing that.
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