free range hippie

[puffinstuff]

And i saw this hippy, least i think it was hippy
had on funny clothes and its hair was all trippy
I says hey you, you sure are a hunny;
even with hairy pitts and yer eyes red and funny

she just smiles, gives my cheek a peck
says you'd be cute too, if you just washed your neck
so i takes off my hat, jangled a spur
stared at the ground, tried not to slur

and i says to her "mame" in my best western drawl
i been a wondering since i been seeing ya'all
why yer always smilin and dancing around
with the way people stare you ought to be down

she just grins, with a knowing little smile
says kick off your boots, stay for awhile
then she pulls outa cig, a marlboro it was not
says i got a secret, you need to be taught

then she barrows my lighter, sparks up the end
I was a little surprised when she held the smoke in
then she hands it to me, I take a puff
a few minets later I was liking the stuff

the colors got pretty, I mighta saw god
started thinking that icecream would taste good on cod
well, to make a long story short and avoid all the fuss
i traded my truck for a vw bus

got some bellbottoms, a greatfull dead tee
stopped cutting my hair, let it grow free
now when folks see me, out on the range
they just kinda laugh and think that im strange

but to tell ya the truth, dont care what they think
cause my horse sure dont mind, and barefeet never stink

[LIBRA]

I love it, too funney!!!


Did you write that???

If yes, good deal, if no where did you find it!!

[puffinstuff]

its one of mine :) thanks so much
and its just a poem, not autobigraphical if anyone was wondering

[moonjava]

hey wow that's a good poem! it's funny and you got all the ryhms (sp?) without it being awkward! I definitely admire that
made me feel happy reading it.
peace!