Poppin' Fresh

[PEACE FROG]

A young man hides himself in a realm of comfortable awkwardness.
Poppin' fresh to marvel at Kubicks red red kroovy.
For the sensation
Recreation
Dispensation
Sacreligious ordination
Timmys, Todds and Chads splattin' the grey matter on the walls of their mother's suburban basements.
While Ashleys, Brittanys and Niccoles will somehow manage to get over it before the weekend.

[Adam Blanchard]

interesting, odd rhythm to it. But over all pretty interesting.

[NCW_Woodnymph]

I like it Froggy. It's somehow dark and playful at the same time. I think it would make a really good rap.

It's nice to see something from you. I've been missing your poetry.:)

:hippie:

[PEACE FROG]

I like it Froggy. It's somehow dark and playful at the same time. I think it would make a really good rap.

It's nice to see something from you. I've been missing your poetry.:)

:hippie:Thanks Nymph, twas good to write something. Before when I'd write it would get buried under 20 tons of Andy spam, so I was discouraged. Thanks to you as well Adam. I like mixing prose and a bit of rhyme scheme. You should check out some of my older stuff. There used to be some really good poets on here. Now there's you. Got any more Adam?

[Adam Blanchard]

yeah, I got a few more that have survived time and incessant rewrites. I'll post em in the other thread.