Adaptation

[theREALsun]

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..................

[Pedata]

Put that back!!! Lol.

It was a trip. Like from beginning to end and back to beginning.

Peace,
Cassandra

[theREALsun]

:lachen001
ok, but only because you are brave, pedata!
sometimes i go back and read and think "WHAT?"
self-doubt....... :(



Muddy Water

coasting through the rolling flatland—
and majority of the surrounding air—who
notices the browness of nature and lack of life—I,
and it—and ox that feeds off of it—
Anne Shirley is my mistress—I dream
of being her—wearing her skin with pride—
freckles and red hair, dreadfully glorious, red hair
—hopelessly romantic by nature, not weak—as I am—
residing in rolling acres of green, Kelley green hills—
sweet fragrant flowers and mud—oh! How I love mud
—and dirt, how I am dirt, a speck—Gil and I would dance
and speak of poetry and inspiration—he would love me
because of my dreadfully glorious, red hair—and I would
despise him, gracefully—every night I would sit in my
puffed sleeve dress on a bridge over the creek—
long and flowing creek—contemplating my lack of
romance in and about life—as I do now, only without
puffed sleeves—the water flows under the bridge
and on—muddy water! Prince Edward Island is lovely
this time of year—and I jump in the long and flowing
creek—and crumble my muddy being into a speck
—carried by blues and greens and specks of me—
flowing freely, a tiny speck with dreadfully glorious,
red hair—the fat ox lapping the luxury of water—beware!
she says! You have become spiral—spinning and spinning
—expanding, I am a tiny speck, yet I am a monstrosity—
I am so tiny, yet I can’t stop the feeling of rising—into the
face of the earth—my smallness becomes a long journey
—and I am a speck on that path—traveling in a tiny head—
with feelings of monstrosity—expanding, spinning, feeling
large—and insignificant—I think I see rolling flatlands and
brown—at the beginning again—leaping into the brown
area—the lack of life—out of the muddy water I came,
still flowing and spinning—drowning in muddy water,
I will return.
~am~

[nappydread]

i saw that!!!....pretty sneakin sun :mixed-smi

two words....dreadfully glorious!!!!
I loved it!
The imagery is great...and kinda reminds me of "Black Muddy River" by Hhunter/Garcia...

Happy b-day!
:hb:

peace

[LIBRA]

no doubt your words are great, had me feeling back and forth too but good, keep it up and dont under estimate yourself you know we all love your poems and if some dont thats ok too!! thats the game when you put yourself out there!! :smilie_wa

[theREALsun]

he he....
ya caught that didja? :p
thanks nappy, dear... :hb: <== those are for you!

and libra, thanks.
i appreciate your kind words,
that IS the hard part,
to put yourself out there
and THAT aspect of it
is very new to me.......
i have books and books full of stuff from over the years,
when i was stuck in a shell
smothered by darkness
and inner self.....
that i never ever would have shared
but
i
am
learning
everyday.....
sometimes it is still scary though
but it is my passion
and
i still feel like :ufo:
but i am spacey by nature
it has taken me
a
l
o
n
g
t
i
m
e
to come to terms with Me,
i just have to remind myself
that thats just the way it is
and it doesn't matter anyway.........
whoa, tangents......

anyway that is why i love this place
i feel at home
so thanks

peace :hippie:

[tooter_mcgee]

i've read your writing before, and i love it. you really are talented. :)

:hippie:

Diana

[RockyJay]

Very talented. I like the unique way you have with words. :)