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beadiebeauty
02-15-2005, 09:54 AM
ok heres a thing for yall to do .
ok everyone can write peotry , u dont have to be great at it but u can still write it !!

a diamante poem is written in the shape of a diamond .

heres how it is written : Example
line 1= winter -noun
line 2 = Rain,Cold-2 adjectives
line 3 =skiing,skating,sleding-3 gerunds all endin in 'ing'
line 4=mountains,wind,breeze,ocean-4 nouns
line 5 =swimming ,surfing, scuba diving-3 gerunds
line 6 sunny ,hot-2 adjectives
line 7=summer=noun

heres one i did :
life
adventurous,beautiful
exciting, caring maturing
nature, love , friends , family
challenging,fearing,killing
hardship, loss
death


now i wanna see yall write one :) so plz have a go at it!

kermit
02-15-2005, 10:02 AM
oo oo I wanna try.

OK

em hem'

Grind my mind into extinction.
Feel the pain of my last affliction
Pack a bowl because of my addiction
Now I know why life looks like fiction.

(opening line from The Cagey-B “Johnny weed seed” on the “what happened” album)
:cheers:

beadiebeauty
02-15-2005, 10:06 AM
oo oo I wanna try.

OK

em hem'

Grind my mind into extinction.
Feel the pain of my last affliction
Pack a bowl because of my addiction
Now I know why life looks like fiction.

(opening line from The Cagey-B “Johnny weed seed” on the “what happened” album)
:cheers:
hehe thats cool .. but only use words .. read the instructions i put up :)

kermit
02-17-2005, 01:55 AM
ok heres a thing for yall to do .
ok everyone can write peotry , u dont have to be great at it but u can still write it !!

a diamante poem is written in the shape of a diamond .

heres how it is written : Example
line 1= winter -noun
line 2 = Rain,Cold-2 adjectives
line 3 =skiing,skating,sleding-3 gerunds all endin in 'ing'
line 4=mountains,wind,breeze,ocean-4 nouns
line 5 =swimming ,surfing, scuba diving-3 gerunds
line 6 sunny ,hot-2 adjectives
line 7=summer=noun



DOPE sorry..


next try.


Brain,
Frozen, numb,
Rejecting, Knowing, Confusing,
Lost, Drunk, stoned, Immaculate,
Talking, forgetting, playing, Smoking,
Forgotten, Forbidden,
Pain

http://www.ani-community.net/forums/images/smilies/grad.gif

beadiebeauty
02-17-2005, 12:02 PM
DOPE sorry..


next try.


Brain,
Frozen, numb,
Rejecting, Knowing, Confusing,
Lost, Drunk, stoned, Immaculate,
Talking, forgetting, playing, Smoking,
Forgotten, Forbidden,
Pain

http://www.ani-community.net/forums/images/smilies/grad.gif
wow thats a cool poem!!! :cool:

kermit
02-17-2005, 12:26 PM
thanks, :hb: