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Strawberry
02-18-2005, 01:52 PM
I have ALOT of poems.. don't worry, I won't post them all here... but here's one I love that I wrote quite a few years ago...

I dream I went to Heaven
And you were there with me
We walked along the streets of gold
Beside the crystal sea
We walked through the clouds all day
And under the stars at night
Our shoulders bumped and you took my hand
Comfortingly holding it tight
We laughed, we talked
You listend as I cried
You wiped my tear and hugged me
As I told you how I died
You took a breath and smiled at me
And told me "It's okay."
"It's in the past," you said. "Look towards the horizon,
For it's dawning a new day"

I have ALOT more... but here's another one I wrote around that same time.. following a trend?

Just when you thought all hope was lost
You find there's one more bridge to cross
You hope it will bring you to a new life
Leave bheind all the pain, suffering and strife
But who do you carry that bag of bricks for?
For you? For me? Forever more?
Throw down those bricks of guilt and shame
Nobody here knows your name
That bridge right there will take you away
So go ahead and cross it - go start a new day

Thanks for reading!!

PEACE FROG
02-18-2005, 04:07 PM
Oh I like your poems very much!!! I Like the bricks metaphor, very cool. Are you a Christian? :)

Strawberry
02-18-2005, 04:51 PM
^_^ Was raised Catholic... and thank you for your kind words. Thank you very much. :hippie:

Sunnydaydreams
02-18-2005, 05:58 PM
aww. i love your first poem! both poems are good but the first is very moving for me. i said aww outloud as i read the part "You wiped my tear and hugged me/ As I told you how I died" i think your really talented & hope you share more poetry here! I would really like to read them! :)

peace & love

Strawberry
02-18-2005, 07:41 PM
Awe, thank you thank you... I would love to share more poetry!! I just have to build up the nerve. :o

peach_blossom
02-21-2005, 05:13 AM
Awe, thank you thank you... I would love to share more poetry!! I just have to build up the nerve. :o

Oh I am very much looking forward to reading more of your work! I find them very good! :)


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