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kermit
02-21-2005, 02:08 AM
Awake and shake the dreams from your hair my pretty
do you realize the change that could become of our past?
I am broken up over the last time of our wine we drink
I love you and our love will last, forever future and past.
peach_blossom
02-21-2005, 04:43 AM
Ooh nice :)

p.s. Isn't this suppossed to be in Poetry/Writing?
PEACE FROG
02-21-2005, 08:18 AM
AAAAAAAH You Ripped off Morrison, counterfeit poet..... counterfeit frog ;) :D
peach_blossom
02-21-2005, 08:22 AM
Baad frog!! :p


:hippie:
theREALsun
02-21-2005, 08:41 AM
american prayer?

as soon as i saw "Awake..."
i knew, and its funny because the other day
i woke up
and wrote this (straight from my blog)

"Awake! Shake Dreams From Your Hair, My Pretty Child, My Sweet"
I woke up this morning
I don't know how long I have been sleeping
the Darkness came and held me down
I feel great today,
like I have never seen a tree,
or a smile,
or heard a giggle,
everything is new.
I feel great today.
I don't remember every feeling this great before.
And I just cannot get enough Mojo Rising!

ha ha....
PEACE FROG
02-21-2005, 09:50 AM
Yes it was, good one Realsun! Awake, shake the dreams from your hair. My pretty child. My sweet one. Choose the day and choose the sign of your day. The days divinity. First thing you see. GOTTA LOVE IT!!!! :D
kermit
02-21-2005, 10:33 AM
AAAAAAAH You Ripped off Morrison, counterfeit poet..... counterfeit frog ;) :D


I was inspired by Morrison.

Just like when I Wright a song in G C D. am I ripping off every artist who has written in G C D or just Mozart?

Why is everyone in happy hippie so mean today!
kermit
02-21-2005, 01:14 PM
Well I wanted to start a group poem, but no one wanted to, I was trying to work it in to a short story about the song,

and I must say again nothing has only been said once by just speaking technically you are plagiarizing. The band sublime and many before and after have made their songs and $$$ by simply quoting other people. So If I was an ant crawling across a wall tell me baby would it make no difference at all? And if I was a roach on a tree tell me would you smoke me? Good god knows!

Any why here is the link to the Ghost song By “the Doors!” No story attached this time sorry.
As you can see I have changed 10% if not more to comply with U.S. copyright laws!

SO please for me just enjoy the song.. it is a awesome poem. Thank you

*kermit grumbles under breath

The Ghost Song (http://ebay4free.com/home/forum/viewtopic.php?showtopic=52&fromblock=yes)
theREALsun
02-21-2005, 01:17 PM
Well I wanted to start a group poem, but no one wanted to, I was trying to work it in to a short story about the song,

(scratches head)
i must have missed that somewheres? :confused:
PEACE FROG
02-21-2005, 01:30 PM
Sorry little brother I didnt intend to be mean, I wouldnt do that, see the winking smiley, it means Im just yanking your chain!!!(I'D DO THAT) So now from the top====>>>>> ;) <<<<<==== Have a great day!!! Ed oh...... BTW Heres a little something I just wrote:When the still sea conspires in armour, and her sullen and aborted currents breed tiny monsters. True sailing is dead, akward instance and the first animal is jetisoned, legs furriously pumping their stiff green gallop......... :D Ha Ha
kermit
02-21-2005, 01:35 PM
Sorry little brother I didnt intend to be mean, I wouldnt do that, see the winking smiley, it means Im just yanking your chain!!!(I'D DO THAT) So now from the top====>>>>> ;) <<<<<==== Have a great day!!! Ed oh...... BTW Heres a little something I just wrote:When the still sea conspires in armour, and her sullen and aborted currents breed tiny monsters. True sailing is dead, akward instance and the first animal is jetisoned, legs furriously pumping their stiff green gallop......... :D Ha Ha

It's all good! :D