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RockyJay
03-03-2005, 06:19 AM
Watching you traverse
inclement adversity
You struggle
but still
determined
you stood
while everything
around you
inside you
breaks
your heart
in great distress
stopped, resting for a while
but still here
filled with
absolute remorse
I will try to correct
my wrongdoings...

Will you go back
the way you were?
Will you be
the girl
I once knew?
Will you forgive
A friend who
led you
to this path?

You loved him
You love him still
But he doesn't
Not that way
anymore

I am
haunted by what
I have done
everday of my life now

I'm so sorry
I damned your soul
to hell on earth
while you
still breathe
I damned mine
to hell
for eternity

And I
don't feel
it's enough.

I'm so sorry. :(

PEACE FROG
03-03-2005, 07:53 AM
Whoa dude thats powerful. Im sorry too, and dont even know why.

RockyJay
03-07-2005, 07:28 PM
Whoa dude thats powerful. Im sorry too, and dont even know why.
Thanks man.
Maybe you are sorry because I can't make a decent poem? :p